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dammonjay
Yusuf Dimas
Nigeria, Niger State, Minna

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Alone with God (2003)

Breathe on me,
that I may recieve Your breathe of life.
Shine on me,
that I may show forth Your lihgt;
Flow within me,
that from me will Your mighty river flow,
Speak to me,
that I may speak Your word unto men.
Use me to Your glory,
that I may be Your earthen vessel of honor.
Walk by me, oh God
that men will see and know Your power.
Touch me, all mighty God
that I shall be the touch that men desire

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dammonjay Comment by: dammonjay - 2007-10-05 05:50
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thank you so much, i actually mean "light". i appreciate it
Comment by: - 2007-10-05 05:44
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Line 3, I think you mean "light"

I am not religious, so the words sound pretty, but I cannot say much else.
dammonjay Comment by: dammonjay - 2007-10-03 23:54
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thank you Lucy, i'm glad you enjoyed this piece. but could you criticize somtimes! it'll make me a better writer
Comment by: - 2007-10-03 06:40
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Beautifully stated. The flow is very nice.
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