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"rock Bottom"

'Rock Bottom'
I've fallen
What seemed miles.
And now I cannot get up.
The dust settling has
Swollen my eyes shut.
My legs are numb
From the boulders
That lay upon.
My cries for help
Just endlessly echo
Upwards toward that
Small glimmer of light.
I've finally done it,
I've hit rock bottom.

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auscowster Comment by: auscowster - 2006-02-09 17:42
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yes the place we may have been at one time or another in our lives with the only comforting fact of we cant get any lower good work once again
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-02-09 14:37
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I seem to always find myself climbing back up out of that pit. nice read
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