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Miller
Kay Miller
Canada, Ont.

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Recollection

Snow hushed forest
stilled zone of dreams crisp thrilled adventures
for the spotters of imagery
labyrinth diseased, these
revelers of the breeze.
Life's unsure/ new team of knowing.




In their absence
night dies.

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kc0003 Comment by: kc0003 - 2008-10-06 10:55
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nicely done...perfect ending...
Arctic Destroya Comment by: Arctic Destroya - 2008-02-10 15:17
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wow this is by far one of the best poems that i have heard eva....short and sweet and the meaning is deep
hx Comment by: hx - 2007-11-20 07:51
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Very vivid. The conclusion reached in the last two lines is inarguable. Very nice work indeed. Thanks for sharing.
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