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Invisible Girl
It wasn’t easy being married to the Invisible Girl.
You’d think that spending your life with a superhero would be bliss, but it’s tough washing bloodstains out of invisible clothes. True, we only ever had to buy single tickets for the cinema, but often when I went to hold her hand I’d be left grasping at air.
When she finally left me I didn’t notice for a week. Superheroes, it seems, don’t need significant others.
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| another reason for me to cultivate my readership...someday, i will think...i read him when ...it is the lean character which penetrates the best. |
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| Cool story. I always labour over how to deliver my more obscure concepts, but you have effortlessly just done it (there is a lesson there) particularly liked "When she finally left me I didn’t notice for a week" though it over powers the final line and makes it redundant. |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-10 03:32
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yeah, my girl friends are invisible as well... not to me however
and very beautiful <i>nihonjin onna</i>
or is she(they) all in my imagination?
oh well, i can't really tell anylonger, and difficult to function socially at all these days... |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-08 04:02
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| This was original and witty! Liked it alot. |
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| really cute, you say everything in so few words and say it well. great job. |
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