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YeOldeFart
Dennis Newman
United States, OR, Springfield

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All The Way In The Old Days

She had me jammed against the driver’s door with her right leg hooked across my lap. Her fingers were tangled in my hair and she had my head pulled back and was sucking my neck. The windows were steamed up, the speaker had been knocked to the floor, the sound was muffled, and I had lost interest in the movie. She kept kissing me and rubbing her breasts against my right arm. I wanted to touch them, but I didn’t dare. I had never touched a girl’s breast.
Her skirt had hiked up to her waist. Her white panties gleamed in the semi-darkness. She moaned, “Robert, Robert, Robert,” and put her tongue in my ear. I squirmed, but couldn’t move.
She took my left hand and placed it on her breast. I couldn’t help it; I squeezed. It was soft yet firm and something inside me stirred. I sat there squeezing her breast. She unbuttoned her blouse and pulled her bra up.
“Do you want to go all the way?” She said.
I didn’t want to go anywhere right then.
”No,” I said.

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RoryBest Comment by: RoryBest - 2007-11-25 06:07
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Haha very good,
In a film critic way "Sure to bring a smile to everyones face."
Casper Comment by: Casper - 2007-11-17 17:31
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Wow...

This takes quite an unthinkable twist....I liked it in all honesty...The only thing that I did not quite get was why he didn't want to go all the way...

I'm not quite sure though, as to whether or not you wanted me as a reader to understand why he didn't want to go the entire way....

I think I've said this before and I'll say it again, you're very talented....
rosiewolf Comment by: rosiewolf - 2007-11-14 15:29
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The ending came as quite a surprise to me! Really good for a giggle. And I so remember the drive-in. Thanks. I needed that.
sarra Comment by: sarra - 2007-11-08 01:58
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Hah, this was wonderful! I just got done critiquing some really really sad writings so coming to a happy place was well needed!

thank you!!
JenaGalifany Comment by: JenaGalifany - 2007-11-05 04:30
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Thanks for the laugh. Poor fool didn't know what he was turning down. Loved it!
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