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| I remember this, it's awesome, so sweet :) |
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Comment by: lucy - 2007-10-09 04:32
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Beautiful.
Emotional.
Love. I can feel it with each wave and each grain. Nice! |
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| Its a short poem but it actually says alot. Its nice to be able to read and identify with the author. Nice read...hope to hear more' |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-08 09:33
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| it is really intersting what you have written with simple terms you have describe lots of things am alzariah and new to editred happy to share my first short stories and first poetry with you |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-08 08:26
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| This is Beautiful. It describes perfectly what the determination of love is. Its personal and general at the same time allowing all readers to share the emotion. Kudos. |
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