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Aqueousillusion
Valerie Long
United States, WA, Seattle

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Access: Public
Comments: 10

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Hast Thou Considered?

Hearts beat wild
Roaming after thoughts
Life of endless flat earth
To fall off the edge
Leave
Me to my universe
Of shattered mirror dreams
Sink
Slowly to the bottom
Of your silence
oblivion

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Metalcove Comment by: Metalcove - 2007-11-23 15:51
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Short though much effective, and the contradictions within just give more power to the images.
esthermorey Comment by: esthermorey - 2007-11-04 14:43
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Short and sweet. A nice little piece. Good Job
Aqueousillusion Comment by: Aqueousillusion - 2007-10-30 22:30
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thanks
karmabinah Comment by: karmabinah - 2007-10-30 19:54
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lovely! really enjoyed (the 2nd and 3rd read too)
Aqueousillusion Comment by: Aqueousillusion - 2007-10-22 22:30
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Thanks!
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