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DaveyBoyGreen
David Cromby
United Kingdom, Harold Newman's World, Liverpool

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18 Lines Of Why I Miss You

I can't make the hairs on my neck go down
I can't look away from your eyes even from five thousand miles
I want to hold you next to me and whisper every minute every hour every day
I see your lips in the dark when I fall asleep
I find it hard to suck in breath every painful second
I want to stroke and warm your hands incessantly
I kiss your neck and lick your life blood veins dream after dream
I can suck your fingertips one by one by one if my eyes close tight & hope enough
My chest is burnt with painful beats
I want your smell to linger & to taste you when I wish
I want everybody else to disappear
I sleep pretending I am curled around you
I want your breath to freeze upon my face and never melt
I want to live inside you
I want to hear you say 'my love' over and over
I want to flick your hair from in your eyes or tie it back and stare
I wish for constant kisses from your lips and eyes and mind
I need to touch your soul like you touch mine and leave a lasting sign.

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drgnflygrl Comment by: drgnflygrl - 2007-12-07 00:31
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All I have is WOW...and a bit of tears.
MissAgent76 Comment by: MissAgent76 - 2007-11-07 04:58
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Beautiful. The third last line is my favourite.
rogue13 Comment by: rogue13 - 2007-11-05 15:53
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Bloody brillant ... this poem is breathtaking from start to end.
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-11-04 14:49
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Love... Oh the yearning the need the want never shallow when it is new, when it is perfect and reciprocated. Love.... skin on skin breath on breath

a delightful read
jenstarese Comment by: jenstarese - 2007-06-28 11:46
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YOWZA!!!

oh man...romance..not trashy romance...but REAL romance with a itty bitty erotic edge makes me allll weak in the knees

thanks for making me all weak in the knees..

This girl should be so lucky...

Jennifer*
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