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Basil
Basil Janssens
Belgium, Antwerp, somewhere

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Handle it with care

He should have seen it coming. It hit him in the face, knocking him out in a flash. He looked at her and didn’t notice the danger that she caused. The hand she stretched was not to shake his hand. He just saw the doorhandle too late, damn glass doors.

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Martagon Comment by: Martagon - 2007-10-16 10:38
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Dankie dat U my gedig gelees het - Rou trane. This is really funny and says it all in a few words. Jy moet definitief in jou eie taal skryf, ek kon jou woorde lees, maar ek wens ek kon jou taal vlot praat.
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LittleMSMorbid Comment by: LittleMSMorbid - 2007-10-11 14:10
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Poor guy....glass doors can definitely be dangerous things. LOL I've run into them a time or two myself.
BooBear Comment by: BooBear - 2007-10-09 17:59
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HAHAHAHA... that is good. And you say that you have no skill. Please. I don't want to hear that again.

You need to fix some spelling words though:
"comming" - coming
"didn'tt" - didn't
"knocked" should be changed to knocking

Good job, Hun
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