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hstewart
H Stewart
United States, Missouri, KANSAS CITY

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Blue Enough

And then the loss was gone
Like clouds of the unforgiven
Sipping through the sky
Blue enough
To remind you of stars
Coming through the black of deep nigh
Dawn will be our answer
It's coming through
The loss of gone

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TirzahLaughs Comment by: TirzahLaughs - 2007-12-19 18:28
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A pretty prism of a poem...gathering and reflecting the emotionsl around it.

You don't need the 'And" and the beginning..at least from my perspective.

My favorite part is.."blue enough to remind you of stars".

I think you meant night instead of nigh..but I could be wrong there.

A lovely poem...one of my favorites of yours.
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