A short note about living (alien poetry challenge 2)
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A short note about living (alien poetry challenge 2)
One must always like seeing new places;
to meet new faces.
Different cultures,
different structures.
There are too many places to go,
move with the flow.
Get what you can,
no need to plan.
Life is short, careful not to miss,
never forget this.
Try to enjoy;
you, lucky boy...
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Comment by: alien Online- 2007-10-16 02:25
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This is a good idea - as with many of the other poems, though, it doesn't seem to show the work of one minute in time - it's rather broader than that - it has a message which is different from it being a snapshot of one single minute, which is what the minute form endeavours to do.
However, I enjoyed your poem on its own merits - maybe it could be re-worked into another new poem?
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Comment by: Scrissy - 2007-10-14 17:38
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Good job on a difficult challenge; I tried several ways & have moved on to more manageable things. LOL! You rock.
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