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how i long for the days
of death and decay
of alien loves
and just indecision
falling was common
swimming in ether
knowing the moon
taking long walks
in the rain
such a comforting pain
holding a finger
veins pulsating laughter
smothering forever
and missing every minute
with you
10.14.07
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Great poem with some very powerful lines. "...swimming in either knowing the moon taking long walk in the rain..." that was my favorite line. Great work, thanks for sharing and take care.
