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Holocaust
Tell the stories of :
Days forgotten
Bodies rotten
Common graves
and
Unknown names
Labeled race
From everyplace
Human torture
Fucked-up future
Endless sorrow
Past still hollow
Bitter tears
and
Constant fears
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| Being a Jew, This hits home. |
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| It takes talent to express yourself in as few words as you did here . . . Yes, you coould have written tomes, but in the end you "brief" poem said all there is to say . . . |
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| few words and a rather nonchalant approach to the holocaust, I would think that emotion would have to be within the lines, and the feeling I get is a very fast uncaring one that just states facts. The holocaust was long, and vicious. But then again it is a good write and does what I suppose you were intending on doing - to state the facts. |
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| They say brevity is . . . Well hell, I can't recall what they say about brevity, but I say this . . . Brevity, the way you write it is nothing short of stupendous . . . So very much said in so few words . . . congratulations . . . |
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