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"In a place where evil resides
And children fear their shadows
a place where a demon hides
this is the place where knowledge grows"
Love this - terrifying and true. |
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| interesting the tales we weave. good mental imagery. |
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Comment by: mitra - 2007-10-17 03:33
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The opening and ending is very strong. Leaving us to wonder if we have missed anything and so we read again.
"evil contorts the heart" - Love this. It speak of believe that all starts out pure. |
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| Interesting. It really set me to think. I loved how you used metaphors such as: "cut off my own legs so the bird may run". It really throws your writing towards another level of "Spiritual" since I see more like a battle inside of you, a soul search that you and only you can control. |
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