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Snow White
Encased in delusion
Hidden in plain sight
Lips fuse
Bodies entwine
Existence a phantasm
No departure or escape
Tainted long ago
by the illusion of you
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| Illusion leads to delusion - I love it! |
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| Very nice illusion! |
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| wow! so good for so few words! It's.... enchanting! |
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Look out Panno! A massive wig creature is taking
over your scalp! Shave it off fast babette, before its
starts dictating regretful love poems too you. Actually,
I might start to like it only if you can teach it to dictate
regretful love poems in classic sonnet form. |
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| Grande ending - you really bring that work to life here, "illusion" - that is what, where, and how - I believe, all relationships begin. Soon reality shows himself and often, feelings turn to begin yet another. Funny, I see I do that myself - am I amiss? Maybe so some, they do not know me as I do. |
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