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I have no idea why this cup is here
I only know it’s half empty and half full
Although the drink sparkles, I won’t be a fool
For, not all that glitters is gold.
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Although short the poem is very thought provoking and contains huge questions about life. Sounds like you are writing from a great depth of life experiences, not all good! I liked it very much.
