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Today's Overreaction
"For the last time read my lips Edith, I was not overreacting!"
" Archie, you beat the t.v. with a bat,just because he didn't want to renew his contract."
" You don't understand, Joe Torre is a major asset to the club, and I'm afraid we will never see another like him.It was the end of an era, a dynasty of sorts."
"Well Archie,the press conference interrupted my soap,I'm not complaining."
" You can catch the rerun on soapnet."
"And you can catch him next year managing the Mets."
"Stifle it heh Edith."
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Comment by: dlynn - 2007-10-22 20:16
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Totally could have been an "All in the Family" episode.
Liked it Crystalrose.
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Comment by: - 2007-10-21 17:07
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LOL ... modernized Archie & Edith. Pretty funny, Crystal.
A few punctuation nits, but good story nonetheless. |
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haha-
All in the family... I watch my soaps on soap-net. This really hit home with me; you've been spying on me, crystal!neat little dialogue. |
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Comment by: mafsa - 2007-10-20 00:53
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lol! great with the row, crystal!
It was the end of an era, a dynasty of sorts.
>loved it!
thanks for the read,
Mary:p |
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