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We waste our
adventures
when we let
our joy lay
bare.
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Enjoyable poem fellow Washingtonian, what about embracing despair even in our joy? i.e. the despair of the J.O.B., but the joy of the ever-necessary unfortunately but true paycheck? Kudos :)
Ok I have a thing for cute and this is that. It was fun and tongue in cheek, nice job (that always sounds like a death knell but in this case I really do mean it.)
