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Want to use me
Feel me from the inside
Turn my fragile mind
Well use me as you will
Fulfill my every desire
Let seep fantasy’s fill
Show me pleasure
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Careful consideration of wording on this one...I like this piece very much, however I wouldn't mind hearing your inspiration to see if I have it right in my mind.hope to hear from you soon, Bebe
