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patrickfinley
Patrick Finley
United States, Ohio, Akron

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POUND! POUND! POUND!

Noisy clatter restless dreams
BANG! BANG! BANG!
Rustle my covers get to my feet
ANGER! ARGUMENT! ANXIETY!
Neighbor asked politely
SLIDE! SWING! SING!
“Shut the hell up, I’m trying to sleep!”

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patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2008-07-20 05:33
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thanks, i wrote this obviously because of the situation, its pretty much moment for moment description. thanks.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-07-20 04:12
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HA!!!!Felt that frustration before we moved! Good one.B
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