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sarah1612
Sarah Manning
United Kingdom, Manchester

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Tenor

Tenor. No more to sing your song
for heart’s pulse.
Not yours or mine. But echoing,
Heard by the ears of the earth
as the river sends up it’s lament.
Tenor. Soar with the rumble of
gathered voices. The rhythm,
you remember, but not just of life.
More than mind or memory
can possess; possession is fleeting.
Fly, voice and rhythm, strong now,
Born of Joy.
Tenor. I know your song, I live
my life by the rhythm of yours.

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venturpreneur Comment by: venturpreneur - 2007-11-14 07:29
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The image and emotion is real. What was your motivation....
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2007-10-23 20:14
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well versed... just in the first line: No more sings your song - would flow better by eliminating "to" out of the verse...

Glen Yumang Manese
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