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hatchzel
hazel bernardo
United States, New York, New York

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Multiples of Fear

Fear cripples.

Fear haunts you like a menacing spirit.

Fear thrives on doubts and mistrust.

Fear wakes us from thinking we are invincible.

A fire in a split second takes everything even your life. From the mansions to average size homes, you lose it to one flicker.

You casually go to the mall and boom! A bomb explosion and you see lifeless bodies around you and you try to run away. Morbidly, you find your mangled....www.filteany.com

*My heart goes out to the families of those who perish in the bombing of Glorieta Mall in the Philippines. To the officials of my country, please stop keeping track of your pork barrel and keep an eye on our nation’s security.*

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian Online- 2008-05-07 20:50
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With just a few things switch round this would be a poem. If this was longer and a little bit more withdrawn from the subject this would be the best essay ever.
Red Pulp Comment by: Red Pulp - 2007-10-27 21:42
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Hazel, I'm sorry to say that this is not expository writing.
mafsa Comment by: mafsa - 2007-10-24 22:11
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Mabuhay, Miss Hazel!
Mary:p
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