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Mernard
Marcus Keeley
United Kingdom, Belfast/Norwich

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Lost Causes

I can see you with your mal-intent,
Throwing your world into discord and back.
You take another pill, it seems to make sense.
Everything is suddenly quiet to you,
When all around the scene is intense.
I can see you with your lack of regard.
Shooting off before I can brace.
Two hearts sharing, beating, skip.
Two minds in a different place.
Two people, each one a farce.

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precar Comment by: precar - 2007-11-18 09:59
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"Two people, each one a farce."

That's a great line. Nicely written.
David Floyd Comment by: David Floyd - 2007-10-25 11:12
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At the end, are you saying that the people are both 'a farce'. Can a person be a farce?
poety55 Comment by: poety55 - 2007-10-24 18:23
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Very interesting. I like it!
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