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broKEN
Kenneth Fairfield Jr
United States, Washington, Olympia

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Inside Out

What must I do to prove to the outside
That the inside
IS the outside?

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broKEN Comment by: broKEN - 2008-04-22 17:20
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what?! this has nothing to do with 'accept me for who I am.' it's much bigger than that. metaphysical. "what must I do?" indeed.
CK Gage Comment by: CK Gage - 2008-04-22 15:54
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Simply...awesome.
sarra Comment by: sarra - 2007-11-08 01:50
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ohhhh! I'm so surprised no one else has commented on this!

You take something so deep, so immense, and you put it in simple words of a mere 15 count - and it speaks louder than anything else I've read on the 'accept me for who I am' topic.
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