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darkpoet1987
Bryant Harland
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United States, MI, Davison

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Sex Dreams

Tormented dreams, naked flesh
Taunt me with your body.
Your kisses tantalize
Your touch graces me
Nothing greater.
Nothing more painful
barely a cloth between us
Endless thoughts repressed
your visage torments me
In dreams of you undressed
I can hardly think
without your breasts in my mind..
Yet when we sit together,
Stagnant orgasms fill the void.

methodically repugnant
Getting off, washing dishes
Doing homework
Writing papers
Getting off
Dying to spark a flame
Consumed in emptiness
rejection at your loving hand
I try to live without
Dreams torment me again

Last night it was someone else
She would have given me
All that I wanted
I could have kissed her
I could have touched her
You weren’t there, and you
Blew me off the night before.
You claimed to be full of love
But no passion within you
Nothing like we use to.
I wanted it for a moment
Because I no longer feel your lust.

I wish I could tell you my dreams
But they will only push me
Push me farther into longing
Spiral me into an endless circle
Unfulfilled lust
I spent five years searching
And three years waiting
Our love is like a poison
That puts me to sleep
And fills me with endless visions
Of what I cannot have
A constant reminder that
Inches exist between our hearts
And miles between our bodies.

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marinarena Comment by: marinarena - 2007-12-20 06:17
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sex , washing dishes and homework... yes, somehow they all are tied together nicely. Your perspective gives me some ideas- I like when that happens! Good stuff!
vickihowery Comment by: vickihowery - 2007-10-26 09:50
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I feel every word of this poem. This is painfully beautiful. You writing comes across honest and raw. I loved this - full of emotion.
mercymanic Comment by: mercymanic Online- 2007-10-26 06:32
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Five years and three? O.O

Good god! You have no idea.
Strange parallels running through the collective.
This one just...
Leaves me naked.

I know the feeling.

Yet another Wendy. ;)
ladylovelace Comment by: ladylovelace - 2007-10-25 22:13
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You have a sincerity and honesty in your writing voice. I enjoyed hearing it.
Makotokugi Comment by: Makotokugi - 2007-10-25 20:18
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Agreeing with Wendy deeply ,
Thank you for this…

M~
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