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Yellow leaf, curled, rocks
windblown, forgotten last boat
moored to slim, brown dock.
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i really like the imagery in this one. You also have a knack for putting a lot of nice substance in just a few lines. and your poem isn't pretentious, you just describe what you see. very nice. and "brown dock" just goes so well together. I enjoyed this one.
