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Ron Paul and the Fed
Paper money costs its creator almost nothing. Because our money in America is paper, our government could produce this country’s currency virtually free to the American people, with no debt attached and no interest due—ever.
However, due to questionable laws passed in 1913, our government actually buys its paper money from a group of private bankers and, worse yet, our government agrees to owe ever-mounting interest on the debt it’s gone into—debt on money it could have printed virtually free for itself. Sound preposterous? The scam of a “privately owned central bank” is one of the oldest in history. American icons such as Franklin, Jefferson, Jackson and Lincoln fought desperately to keep this country from being afflicted with such a money system, but early in the 20th century powerful American businessmen, working closely with European banking interests, managed to get the “Federal Reserve System”—which is not federal and has no reserves—passed into law.
The dying dollar and the hemorrhaging American economy that we see today is not a result of capitalism or natural market forces—it is the result of a few private bankers artificially manipulating our economy by flooding it with free paper dollars—and by adjusting interest rates at their whim: first lowering them, causing citizens to hurl themselves into debt, and then raising them, quite often making those debts un-payable.
The myth about the Federal Reserve is that it regulates our economy. In fact, shortly after its gaining control of our economy it presided over the worst depression in modern history—a depression that could not have taken place if, among other things, the paper dollars in circulation had not been drastically reduced. Additionally it has, over the last century, steadily devalued the dollar to less than 4% of its original buying power and, by artificially manipulating interest rates, it has transformed our society from a mentality of frugality to a mentality of reckless, often utterly insane, debt incursion. The phenomenal national debt and ruined currency that we face today exist because the Federal Reserve controls your money and your “free market” for their gain.
Please understand: The system is criminal. This is the value of your labor, your savings and your home being toyed with. This is the question of whether or not your children or grandchildren will be able to buy homes—that staple of the American Dream—for their families. Already, as you read this, most young adults cannot hope to buy a house, and those who can must take out tremendous loans from Federal Reserve banks.
Not surprisingly, the absolute control over money has allowed the Federal Reserve to purchase almost complete silence from modern politicians. Certainly none of the “top tier” presidential candidates from either party will discuss the actual cause of the dangerous economic ground America now treads on.
In this instance, as in so many others, Ron Paul stands alone against the entire political machine. Dr. Paul is a self-taught economist who has written numerous books on the subject, and he has fought for many years for a debt-free, scientifically-regulated U.S. currency and an end to the present system of wealthy elites kindly robbing the masses of working Americans.
This information is presented in the hopes that you will begin to understand that the America we love has quite literally been stolen from us. A dishonest money system undermines every function of a free society and opens the door wide for every other species of corruption.
Circumstances in this country are far worse than you may realize. Our economy was hijacked and destroyed by increments over the 20th century and, if we choose to look, we can now witness the destruction of many other aspects of our life that we take for granted.
We ignore Ron Paul’s message, and his unique presidential candidacy, at our own peril—and more importantly, at the peril of our children’s and grandchildren’s well-being.
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| This is completely different from anything I typically read. I chose your essay to read because I'm a) a new writer on this site and b) I didn't know where to start so I searched for writers near me geographically (I'm in Severna Park, MD). Having said that - I really enjoyed this! It was informative yet entertaining, presented in a way that appealed to the "average" American. I'd love to read your short stories. I apologize for not giving a more detailed critique, but as a brand new writer I don't feel qualified...yet. |
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| Well I do have a short attention span at times but this "read" is very captivating. I kept reading because it's interesting and I had no idea about the money scam in our own country but I did know how corrupt that our banking system along with some government affiliates can be. Again thanks for such an informative piece. Robin Michelle |
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Comment by: Kowalski Online- 2007-10-27 21:31
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Interesting essay and thanks for putting it on ER, where nothing is safe from the nitpickers. It's very clearly written with good conversational grammar and spelling.
Though it takes a long time to get to the point - if it's to be a flyer it has to grab the reader pretty fast to avoid winding up in the next trash can down the block. I note it's titled "Ron Paul and the Fed", although in all these 600+ words there seems to be only a single sentence detailing what Ron Paul stands for. It's really a plea to vote against the current monetary system, not for Ron Paul, who comes across as a minor player in this piece.
In the fourth paragraph you take on the Federal Reserve, though this seems like an uphill challenge. Most people, I'd guess, see the Fed's role as important and fairly well executed over the past handful of decades. The massive, growing debt our country bears might also be attributed to politicians' preference for spending money over collecting taxes. When they spend it, there's always somebody who applauds, but nobody seems to cheer the tax bill.
I'd suggest building on the Ron Paul sentence and stressing the positives about Ron Paul. You might also consider using his name a lot more.
You might drop a few paragraphs, present a description of the Fed's shortcomings contrasted with an argument for an alternative system, and describe why Ron Paul is an able champion for a better society. |
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Comment by: Teri - 2007-10-26 13:08
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Hi, Matthew,
First, thanks for bringing this topic up, if for nothing else than to make people think and to inform.
You've received a lot of good advice so far, mainly from Subtropic. And you've gotten some bad 'advice', which I'm glad to see you're ignoring.
Would I read this if it was handed to me on a street corner? Yes, definitely. But as Jim mentions, if you really want to strike a chord with the 'entertain/educate me now but make it less than 100 words' Homer Simpsons of the country, you're going to have to get their attention and keep it and want them wanting more.
I'm sure you've thought of this, but I'd make it a little more concise, a bit more 'theatrical' (for lack of a better word) and keep in mind most people have access to the internet. I think the more informative parts of your essay would be best detailed on a website. Think of it like teaching someone how to swim: first, you have to get them in the water.
Anyway, this is merely my two cents. It's good to see someone taking a stand, an initiative. And as far as keeping politics and religion out of writing ... pardon me while I laugh myself sick.
Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Teri xo |
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Comment by: MLB - 2007-10-26 09:06
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In fairness to myself, this is presented with a bit more flair on the back of the flyer I've designed ... But I now see that I need to simplify and amplify, and I have some definite ideas as to how to do that.
Louise Kay, thanks for taking the time and trouble ... I have been thinking about sourced material, and including the income tax dynamic--which is verified and ought to really piss people off if they can be made to understand it--and I will include Paul's solution to the problem ...
KisaMogwai, Glad to know you. Yeah, I've got some conventional Ron Paul literature, but your average cynical apathetic jackass just sees another candidate, so I'm trying to come up with something that will bring about a breakthrough in maybe one out of twenty jackasses. This particular bit of writing obviously isn't it, but all the feedback here has helped me get a feel for what I need to do.
Big thanks to everyone. |
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