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Until Death do Us Part.
"I'm sorry," he kept on saying,
While she kept on begging.
"Until death do us part," he said,
Before he kicked her in the head.
Time with you was such a waste,"
He screamed in her bloodied face.
"No longer will you be in my way,"
Then, he stabbed her with his blade.
"No more will you try to leave,"
That's when she stopped breathing.
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| Interesting, Well written |
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| Very interesting and the man sounds like something I would do in a relationship that someone had once had hurt me. I do like it, very dark...very death like. Kinda reminds of me Corpse Bride though, "Until death do us part and believe me, that'll come sooner then you think!" all in all very, very, lovely! |
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