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Makotokugi
Matthew Oelke
United States, ca, corona

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I had swallowed…Vibrant colors...To paint You...

Vibrant colors I have to paint to emptiness I had swallowed… enveloping my freedom of me, my numbness is death…will life paint a girl in darkness… is there enough time to know you… pulling me inside, taunting my beseeching desire waiting for me… inside the nude existence, I want to paint life to feel you…are you ready again?

M~


© Copyright 2007 published

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lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-10-26 15:39
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Sexual.

MM,,,,mmmmm
caterwaul367 Comment by: caterwaul367 - 2007-10-26 05:44
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Fascinating.. I love the juxtaposition of the colors that you swallowed versus the emptiness found.. life painting the girl in darkness, and so to find her, you must paint life.. It is haunting, to me.. I remember being like her.. THANK YOU; it's awesome
mercymanic Comment by: mercymanic - 2007-10-26 03:42
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Beautiful. Fight the creeping death of slumber. As long as we draw breath within the grace, there is time for Technicolor dreaming.
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