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Makotokugi
Matthew Oelke
United States, ca, corona

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Once I loved a woman…

Once I loved a woman. Who I thought the gods themselves had sent me, they did…I loved the whole world, because she was in it…her strength bests my own, I will love her,
forever…

Long we will be parted, but I could bear it… as I know she would return one day…when she does , will her heart be wiped clean…will she still love me?, like I have?


M~


© Copyright 2007 published

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mercymanic Comment by: mercymanic - 2007-10-26 10:33
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Forgiveness, and understanding are givens for those that breathe fire.

I hope you find yours, and the woman who can grant them with a word.

The world is as small as a single thought.

If you do perhaps I'll find mine as well.

Synchronicity abounds.
uqbahTC1 Comment by: uqbahTC1 - 2007-10-26 09:19
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nice write thanks for commenting me by the way.. I really like how you put your conflict here.
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