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That’s the one forever known I won’t mind...
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The only one of many whoever ever could, She reminds me of the one who cut up the negatives in my life...hypnotized the sapphire of triangle … diamond and purple silver, don't break my heart …cool cuts with open eyes, stand still and come closer don't let it stop you… your to good at it aren't you? I wont forget … you better! I fell anywhere hard, what is mind going to, perfect intrinsic, perfect hmmm... of itself petals are pink illuminated floating weightlessness brush…
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You're too good aren't you? (Check your grammar there) Very deep but at the same time try to organize more those feelings cos they are indeed storming!
