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Can I touch you to see if you're real…
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Can I touch you to see if your real… there is something but nothing in inside… can my heart take the strain or will it dissect, the book falls to the floor…
For all these years I've been sleeping the Kat masks tied tight with close phials snap the fabric of who we are…the rivers of who we are… in a wave and a turn will I see you again…
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"in a wave and a turn will I see you again" this is one the strongest (if not THE STRONGEST) line you have here! My brave fellow writer...I salute you for in few words you have been able to describe the motionless heart of love!.
