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AHShadowRai
Shadow Rai
United States, Arkansas, Decatur

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Sixty-Nine Souls

(and finally, two worlds collide................. )
{Looking like a banshee hovering, eering shrieking}



Darker your room gets, abnormally

Sitting alone, watching tv

One tape left of your sickening glee

'Bet cha never expected again to see me'





'You killed me! You did! I was so benign!

My torment for years you ended at nine!

A decade flown by, this unspeakable crime!

I emerge from abyss, it's your turn this time!'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Hmm, what's the matter, close your d*mn mouth!'

You afraid of my army brought back from the south?'

(Tortured they were) like me cotton mouthed,

Afraid to fight back as if they weren’t allowed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Sixty-nine souls that you brought together,

By cleaning up evidence, Ooo, you're so clever.'

'You'd never get caught, not you, tch, not ever!

But your ties to the victims weren’t easily severed'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'You stupid sick mother, how could you forget!?'

'All the charms and the trinkets buried under

your shed?'

'Sarahs gold bracelet and Kims ruby, so red?

Jessys bikinis and hair from my head?'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'The police didn’t find them nor did the Feds

H*ll we even forgot till you called up death!'

'Your moms never watched over you like she said
Ouija calls hades, the sufferable dead!'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Oh, how original, reach for that bat!

Go on, take a swing! You'll miss, I know that!'

'We're not of this world but, from one so vast

Beyond comprehension and here at last!'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Ten years I've waited, others many more,

We've watched all the others you failed to score,

We still hear their heartbeats, their screams absorbed,

'Tis you Satan's brother all children abhor!'


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Why are you backing down? Coward arth thee?

T'was no fear in your eyes when you beat and raped me!'

'Held down by my neck, forced to my knee!'

'So weary was I, tender age of three'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'So what of the rest?! They chose not to speak!'

'You had rid them, so young and too weak!

But, pierce what's left of your heart to back me?'

'They will and they'll laugh as you cower and plead!'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...

'There is no stopping these souls released fresh

To whip and impale your mortal flesh!'

'To them it's like they have just passed away, yes!

Stranded in limbo long awaiting this quest.'


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Flame now surrounds you, burning off digits

And your precious 'master' has found himself rigid'

'Blood that's been boiling now spews like a civets

Along with your in-ards a floor of composites'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Your hollowing torso collapses beneath us,

Vapors that rise from your corpse animus!'

'Soul to soul your chilling awkwardness,

We capture whats left and toss it to abyss!'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sixty-nine souls lost, ten years or more

Now shield their eyes at brightness galore

Breezes start flowing from wings of reward

Sixty-nine souls sent to live in accord

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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AHShadowRai Comment by: AHShadowRai - 2007-10-28 15:27
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Wow, Thank you so much ShadowDancer, I really respect your view *^_^*

All the Very Best, Shad @)~>~
Shadowdancer Comment by: Shadowdancer Online- 2007-10-28 15:13
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Deeply rivoting, kept me reading til the shocking end, part story part prose/poem. Powerful!
AHShadowRai Comment by: AHShadowRai - 2007-10-28 12:31
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LOL UniqueinKansas, Thanks hon *^_^*

All the Very Best, Shad @)~>~
AHShadowRai Comment by: AHShadowRai - 2007-10-28 12:30
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Makoto, I'm very flattered, Thank you *^_^*

All the Very Best, Shad @)~>~
AHShadowRai Comment by: AHShadowRai - 2007-10-28 12:29
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Thank you so much Nadine *^_^*

All the Very Best, Shad @)~>~
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