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inviscera
Stevie Gray
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Bits Left Over

Having put my mind back together
a few times now,
it occurs to me
that every time you take something apart
and reassemble it,
you always end up with a few bits left over
that don’t seem to fit anywhere:
a few metal washers, a lost screw,
a bit that goes ‘boing’ for no reason.

I think about the various
disassemblies and reconstructions
taken place over the years,
and consider the pile of leftover components
in my hand,
the pieces that wouldn’t fit,
wonder if they were important.

[Written following a conversation with Gregory Dancer - 28/10/2007]

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Scribe Comment by: Scribe - 2007-11-19 14:04
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Very cool concept. Loved it. Perhaps the pieces left over are what it's all about.
mojeria Comment by: mojeria - 2007-11-18 20:20
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i like this piece...i often find myself wondering if the pieces i cut away and reattach really matter
ImMyOwnHeroin Comment by: ImMyOwnHeroin - 2007-11-09 00:16
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this is great! and so very true! i often wonder if i had more pieces years ago than i do now...sometimes i just don't feel whole and wonder if i can fit the loose pieces in somewhere. i love how everyone can relate to this piece.
kms Comment by: kms - 2007-11-01 21:31
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so true, very enjoyable
Gregory Comment by: Gregory Online- 2007-10-29 16:09
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Well I know that sensation, the worry that you may have left out an important part. And you mind may very well not be working in the way it should.
I probably have enough left over parts to make a second personality.
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