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Makotokugi
Matthew Oelke
United States, ca, corona

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Behind the curtain I…

Empty spaces, what are we living for… Abandon places I guess we know this door, on and on… does anyone know what were looking for? Another hereo, another mind is behind the curtain… I must be more than I…

M~


© Copyright 2007 published

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timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2007-11-02 23:41
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This one is my favorite. Anything dealing with the human existence has to be great :-) Loved the ending; I agree, there has to be more than meets the eye...
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