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Gently,so sweet...
I exist. It's sweet, so sweet, so slow. And light: you'd think it floated all by itself. It stirs. It brushes by me, melts and vanishes. Gently, gently.
M~
© Copyright 2007 published
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| I think my pre-commenters said it all. I think your work is like silk. It flows,beautifully. |
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Comment by: Loloix - 2007-12-10 22:10
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| it's like dreaming, intoxicating yourself with the smoothness in it..good |
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| So beautiful and easy to absorb. You almost breath it. I like your form, like a pipe dream... Nourishing choice of words (funny how so few contributers listen to the sound of their wordss). I look forward to reading more. |
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Comment by: lucy Online- 2007-11-04 05:15
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| Appreciation of everything, that is what I see in you words, here and in other works. It moves me. It takes me to the now and helps me to appreciate where I am and what is surrounding me. "So sweet..." Thank you for that. |
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| Love the way in which you write. This was beautiful and succinct . |
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