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smalltownpoet
mackenzie schmitt
United States, Oregon, Forest Grove

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Eden's Apple

Take it.
Bite right in.
Perched precariously on that branch where you placed it.
Calling to you.
Succulent fruit is hidden beneath that tough, red skin.
Just calling to you.
Such curious flavors could dance upon your tongue.
Take it.
Its yours.

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DressedinPoetry Comment by: DressedinPoetry - 2008-01-20 16:23
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I really want an apple right now. It's interesting that you can make me feel that with only this amount of words. Amazing.
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2007-12-11 19:04
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The problem is after the first bite the whole world starts to fall apart, but temptation is welcoming at times...


Glen Yumang Manese
Bucho Comment by: Bucho Online- 2007-11-13 08:46
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oh lawdy...so much innuendo here...i love it! they say it's better to show than tell, and this piece definitely proves that idea right.
kms Comment by: kms - 2007-11-02 09:48
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applicious
PLMII Comment by: PLMII - 2007-11-01 19:23
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good one....
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