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AHShadowRai
Shadow Rai
United States, Arkansas, Decatur

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Die Puppeteer

Such careless
finger tips

pierce my flesh

elongated bruises
behind

always left

teetering my limbs
you do

I am your commands

within these
four walls

dangling from your hands
~

caterer yes,
I too you

I am your existing will

through every
dance

you jolt and steal

pieces of soul
my even keel

Set me free to
flee from here

when death does

strike you puppeteer........

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AHShadowRai Comment by: AHShadowRai - 2007-11-06 16:56
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RJLooney, you nailed it my friend, I was thinking along the lines of domestic abuse when I wrote it *^_^* Thank you so much for commenting

All the Very Best, Shad @)~>~
rjlooney Comment by: rjlooney - 2007-11-06 15:56
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Touches a nerve with me. Could this be about abuse? Controlling of another? That's what it made me think about. Good job!
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