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inviscera
Stevie Gray
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Tired Of It

Now the people have gone,
leaving the house
a little less empty than I feel,
I have time to think things over,
and find myself
feeling numbly disappointed
by the quality of my thoughts.
The same few words repeat:
- "Stop hurting.
It's getting boring" -
over and over,
endlessly,
monotonously,
never changing
and never making
the slightest bit of difference.

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rljcooper Comment by: rljcooper - 2008-07-16 05:31
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Good. Really good. I liked it.
I can relate
gilwaters Comment by: gilwaters - 2008-07-14 07:17
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How frustrating - I can't discern anything to nitpick about with this poem. Quite a lovely expression of alienation that describes my state of mind from the age of 10 onwards.
akabinny Comment by: akabinny Online- 2008-07-10 07:10
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Love this, especially:

"Stop hurting, it's getting boring."

A very relevant topic, I'm sure, for many writers. Good write.
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-11 17:59
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Good. Really good. I liked it.
mcwando Comment by: mcwando - 2007-12-07 12:04
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Simply put,i've been there.
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