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To My Grandma
To My Grandma
We are so much alike.
You inspired me to become an artist, to be just like you.
You inspired me to become a musician, to be just like you.
I have your bone structure and your body type.
Sometimes I have your stubborness.
We are so much alike and I want you to know:
I love you so very much and I aspire to be more like you all the time.
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| Liked the consonance of 'bones', 'body' and 'stubborness'. Perhaps the final line could relate, in some way, to these sounds or to these ideas, or -- to both? |
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Comment by: KLynn - 2007-11-19 16:15
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| Does that ending do the trick? |
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Comment by: abhinaw - 2007-11-07 04:51
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| I loved it which paved way to my grandma's grace in the past......they are wonderful. |
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Comment by: Taels - 2007-11-05 21:46
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| That's sweet :) Reminds me of my grandma. I like it. |
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Again, the end lacks, but the words are a tribute, just to add a little added touch in the end: Now, I can blend both of us and become true...
Glen Yumang Manese |
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