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Impression of beauty
void of depth
complete with hunger
and regret
A wild forest
of magnificent sights
and beneath the surface
a broken vice
Cling to distortion
inhuman and fantastic
beauty created
for the false and the plastic
Praise of common people
fear of neglect
pour lavish devotion
on what no one can get
Puppets of rationality
with a cluttered mind
like shards of broken glass
but my! i look divine!
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This has a great flow - one that doesn't show - which is really cool.
Puppets of rationality - wonderful.
So much going on here, alluding to depths that don't get flashed - they just ease themselves in to your consciousness. Thank you.
