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Who is this antichrist?
What makes him so special?
Is he something different?
That no one has ever seen
-Wanting, but never able
No one ever calls him out
spilling fear
Where is this mythical being?
Gigantic image he must be?
Will Christo defeat him?
I think he will
The good side always wins
-no matter what!
Right?
The antichrist is a murderer
Nothing more
Nothing less
Taking the lives of innocent children
And not even batting an eye
Changing the world around him through fear
- still afraid
The climax of this epic
Progressing over time
Building and building like a Digweed’s track
while People watch as part of the story
-Not understanding the stakes
Carrying on everyday responsibilities
Flustered, and out of sync
Church bells always in the background
Celestial harmony that can’t be explained
The day is coming
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I didn't like the questions at the beggining and the poem seems very open ended with not much filling, just questions and 'facts'. Not my kind of deal.
