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raindrops (haiku)
love falls like raidrops
and puddles around my feet.
my rainboots stay dry.
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I really liked your raindrops haiku!
Here's three of my rain haiku:
coolness of spring rain
waiting with the bus queue
on newly cut hair
Mainichi Shimbun 125th Year Anniversary Anthology, Japan, 1997
‘sundog haiku journal: an australian year’ sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998
California State Library - Main Catalog Call Number : HAIKU S852su 1997
the geraniums
flowering again
just before the rain
Potpourri Publications, Kansas, U.S.A. April 1994
the rain
almost a friend
this funeral
Seven Magazine literature feature: “Three lines of simple beauty” Bristol U.K., Saturday April 29th 2006
First Australian Haiku Anthology ISBN 0 9577925 9 X University of Queensland, 2003
The New Haiku, Snapshot Press, 2002, ISBN 1-903543-03-7
‘Hidden’ British Haiku Society Anthology 2002 ISBN 1-903746-26-4
‘The Omnibus Anthology, haiku and senryu’ 2001, ISBN 1-903746-09-4
Cornell University, Mann Library, U.S.A. "Daily Haiku" poet for Oct 2001
British Haiku Society article ‘On minimalism and other things’ Vol 9 No.3 September 1999
Azami haiku magazine Osaka, Japan September 1995 |
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| I'm kind of new here. But, I just wanted to say that that is an incredibly deep 13 words. I love it. :) |
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Comment by: - 2007-11-07 19:32
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ah, the boots would be trust,
the puddles would be lust,
and the falling of the rain
but upon your head 'twould touch. |
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| i admire this haiku and add that you should throw periods to end lines 2 and 3 because the pause helps the poem. |
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