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nadinesellers
nadine sellers
United States, Missouri

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Pale Memory

Blue haze slowly metamorphoses hills into rosy giants above gray sands. Light becomes alive, enlarges into a faint aura, disarming the ominous mountain range across the valley.
The animal within awakens to the pale glow; the eye, afraid to miss the wonder that engulfs, searches toward the East, as if life itself emanated from that point in primal dawn; still so near, yet impalpable, swelling into reality in the breast of the beholder.
The great phalanges of a headless sphinx evolve out of the morn, foreboding on the bare flanks of a hillside. Shapes move faster than mind, colors define and redefine a continuous dance of vanishing nocturnal demons.
Joshua, arms reaching up above man and ass, darkly praising aurora-multiforma, the sky now a perfect cupola of opaque grays. The path, a winding animal, creeping narrowly to infinite hardness in the arid peaks afar.
I watch from the shadow of what was night impenetrable a fraction of time ago, and seek the spirit of those who once, like myself, hunted in these desertic hills. I find awe in pantheistic respect for continuum, here on this ground, between the Ute and the deer consciousness; perpetually in perennial precarity.
I, proud ignorant, am but a frying pan away from silent nets at tribal hunts. We, are but a gun away from those who survived; our knowledge, once removed from understanding.
I, breathe reverence at dawn, I smell fear at breakfast; ever concerned, ever aware: the masculine spirit of the hunter pervades volcanic rock, femina dries up among cacti, to feed but the toughest of animals, in the hardest of climes.
Here I begin anew, with yet another dawn over the pale gray sage.

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jyngrehl Comment by: jyngrehl - 2007-11-04 11:56
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To me this seems to be a meddly between ancient knowledge and the illusion of knowledge we have of the present. The hero seems to be trying to gain true knowledge from both the past and the present so that he will have a better future...
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