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PrincessMonica
Monica Martinez
United States, Texas, Cuero

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"Eternal Essence"

Eternal Essence

I caught your essence in a dream,
And when I awoke I still had it in my hand.
I caught your spirit in the clouds,
And when I landed I still had it in my embrace.
I caught your love in the ocean's deepest abyss,
And when I surfaced I still had it in my heart.
I feel your voice on my skin, and your presence at my fingertips.
And your existence down my back.
And when I look into your eyes, your sky surrounds me.
Your oceans drown me.
Your sun's rays engulf me.
I belong to you.
All that I am.
All of my existence.
You shape me.
You mold me.
You create me with every breath you take.

Monica Martinez
Copyright ©2007 Monica Martinez

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ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-03-07 11:48
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Eternal essence makes me think of God. Wondering if this poem is about a spiritual awakening, a revelation of His greatness and love for us, His creation. Janet
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-11-06 07:05
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What a sentiment. Love.

Fav. line: I look into your eyes, your sky surrounds me.

Thank you for sharing your heart in this writing.
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