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Syd7
Christina Spooner
Canada, Ontario, Mississauga

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Broken

In the hidden corners on my mind,
Is a place only you can find.
Ill be here waiting for you,
Bound and hungry and blind.

Through the lonely streets I walk,
Ignoring those who gawk.
I wait for the day you come,
Uncover me, save me, break the lock.

Up in the sky I stare,
Hoping upon hope you hear my prayer.
I wait for the day I will no longer be,
Broken, torn and bare.

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Syd7 Comment by: Syd7 - 2007-11-07 20:20
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Many thanks, it always pleases me when people do see the emotion I was feeling when I write, I do wish they were often better emotions! lol. But then again, is being lonely now and then so bad?
Requiem Comment by: Requiem - 2007-11-06 08:12
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I am sure, that when your prince finds you, all will wallow in jealousy. Beautiful.
Ladygothyka Comment by: Ladygothyka - 2007-11-06 02:59
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Lovely hun. Very lonley sounding and makes me just want to hug you.
EnigmaticSoul Comment by: EnigmaticSoul - 2007-11-05 12:26
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Very vivid and imaginative. Great read.
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