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Rebeccaji
Rebecca Bista
United Kingdom, London

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Limits of Love

“It’s only once you're married that you really start to think about death.”

I watched her head to the train. She was dodging raindrops still dripping from the limes. After about 100 metres she turned and waved, as if for a short time she’d forgotten me, and then the recollection of our meeting had crossed her mind again suddenly. I waved back, of course. I didn’t think then that it would be the last time.

It was only when I was writing the invitations for my own wedding a few years later that I thought again about her words. How she’d never before considered if she’d be buried beside her partner. “Can you imagine being possessive even in your grave?” she’d laughed.

There wasn’t very much of them left to bury, by all accounts, by the time they’d dismembered the wreckage.

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Rebeccaji Comment by: Rebeccaji - 2007-11-09 03:42
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Thanks Karen for the feedback. Hmm. Yes, I can see suddenly could go. Limits are imposed, not chosen, I think is my theme (as elsewhere).
karjon Comment by: karjon - 2007-11-08 14:11
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Apart from cutting the word 'suddenly', I think this is a very good Wee Story, Rebecca.

I love the limits of love you've chosen to address i.e. no limits, wanting to be together even in death. Great take on the title.

Thanks for the read.

Cheers

Karen
Juanita Comment by: Juanita - 2007-11-07 07:35
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Good story. I like your writing style. I also read your story, "Prestidigitation." Both are really good.
Kowalski Comment by: Kowalski - 2007-11-06 16:10
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I like the pharse "dismembered the wreckage." Paints a picture. Great story!
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