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Serene Moon boomeranged back to itself
What the earth care about serenity
Entity is the vacuum
Vacuum the entity
What a radiance to radiate
And what for black-holes to suck?
A mass of loopholes is man
Deciphered my man in the moon
Stared a fanatic stare
And vowed to turn to a black-hole
The tiniest in the earth
And be pregnant with moonlight
And wondered
Where his shadow was
Was he changed to transparent vacuum?
He sat on the grass below
And gave a philosopher’s bellow
Of charm as if sad
He radiated earth’s beam
And he found that
He were but a transparent entity of earth
And moon was moving round him!
And inside and outside
And every side possible
My man was invisible to my scrutiny
I leapt up and belched a pride for him
Earth were but a blissful entity
And it is he who cared for it!
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you are always great sir, usally i cannot make out all that you write...but his time i hope i have done it rather remarkably..
Entity is the vacuum
Vacuum the entity
these lines epitomizes your points as i deduced...these are on the other hand hybrid of orientail and western philosophy. good write and very jolting read
sandesh
