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zantocon
Brian Mullins
United States, IL, Genoa

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Tattered Sandals

Snow kissed his toes
Through tattered sandals
As he trudged against the wind
Alone and weary he walked
Looking for a stand
Just a place to rest
A small cop to ward the wind
Fallen tree or hollow log
Numb legs and blue toes
As memories flow
Alone and weary he walked
Occasionally behind he looked
Hands on his shoulder
No one behind
Only his footsteps
As the sun began to set
Golden and orange
Tears began to fall
As memories flow
A kitchen once his
Filled with children
And pumpkin pie
Alone and weary he walked
Looking for a stand
Just a place to rest
And snow kissed his toes
Through tattered sandals

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babylonboy Comment by: babylonboy - 2008-06-06 17:45
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Overriding surreal quality to this one. It has a dreamlike feeling.
OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2007-11-09 19:53
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I love the snow kissing his toes through tattered sandals...

but then you lose me in the middle

the ending left me with unanswered questions about this scene...

just my two cents.
EnigmaticSoul Comment by: EnigmaticSoul - 2007-11-08 00:49
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This is a wonderful read. Very beautiful and heartfelt.
eternaloptimist Comment by: eternaloptimist - 2007-11-07 11:56
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Tragic and beautiful. Anything but numb.

I enjoyed it =)
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