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in the locus of feelings and intuitions
I lose my virginity to an unknown porn star
and my hair to sanity
defying vanity I wear my bald head boldly
sometimes the loss of amour proper
gains unpretentious qualities
and when the night drips down
brought by the rain
I'll be your bald boy
you'll be my queen of hearts
wearing red regally
I'll strap on my love
and walk the midnight roads with a bulge
under my shirt
throbbing
thrusting
piercing
in a coronary occlusion of heart
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I'm enjoying the transisitions you make here between gender and sexuality. Not everything in life is so cut and dry, black or white. You are an interesting writer.
Interesting piece. I liked the diction, and I liked the action taking place, the imagery of motion at the end. You loose your hair to sanity and have a heart attack for love. What a guy!
